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posted 30th May 2017, 9:00 AM

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17th Jun 2017, 8:42 AM

anon

The expressions in this comic are always top notch. The Subtle looks and body language come through so clearly it's great. I do wish there was more detail in the background though, specifically the middle/biggest panel. There's too much empty space, makes it feel flat. Designs on the carpet or wall would do it some good, even If was just for one scene! I know detail isn't always possible but regardless I like where this is going!

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17th Jun 2017, 9:23 PM

Gillian Renk

Thanks for the feedback! You make a very good point. Lately I've been a little rushed on comic pages, and I think it's showing in some of the backgrounds especially. I'll keep that in mind as I work forward!

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12th Jul 2017, 7:26 PM

Storysmith of Arca

How do you do the body language so well? I remember reading earlier that you don't use reference material very much, so what do you do to get all the subtlety in the poses?

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13th Jul 2017, 10:29 AM

Gillian Renk

Gosh, I wish I had a better answer! Practice, I guess? Life drawing classes might have helped, but I'm not sure, it's been a while.

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