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posted 24th Jan 2017, 9:00 AM

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24th Jan 2017, 9:50 AM

bizarremoon

What a way to go! First get possessed and then die. I wonder who's voice was speaking through him...

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24th Jan 2017, 2:17 PM

Arnuz

The scorch... It speaks! Scorchs!

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25th Jan 2017, 3:02 PM

Amrynthedragon

That was spoopy

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12th Jul 2017, 4:25 PM

Storysmith of Arca

I apologize for nit-pickiness, but the sentence in the first panel really feels like it needs either punctuation or to be rephrased...right now it's a bit of a run on sentence.

Really loving this, though!

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13th Jul 2017, 10:23 AM

Gillian Renk

Whoops, there's definitely supposed to be punctuation! No worries, I appreciate you pointing it out. I'll fix that soon!

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17th Nov 2017, 10:04 PM

navegar

Wow what a great way to develop this story. Love it.

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