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posted 30th Aug 2016, 8:00 AM

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5th Sep 2016, 12:43 AM

AlpineBob

Is something supposed to be happening with the black box in the last panel?
It obscures Jethenis a bit, but not enough that we can't see him draped over the horse...

Also, and I hate to say it, but I'm not fond of Lessar's "Just Wait and See" - it really is a comment to us, since he must have explained _something_ to Jeth to convince him to ride the horse like that.

How about, "You, my friend, are drunk!"
Nah.
Maybe a simple "Well,..." would work?
Or something like "As it happens..."
Really, anything that trails off into the next panel would make sense to me as a transition.

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5th Sep 2016, 7:20 PM

Gillian Renk

It's just a transition box. The intent is more to show that Lessar is heading up to the gate, as it'll be more clear what's happening on the next page (though I admit the framing of this panel didn't turn out perfectly--live and learn!).

As for Lessar's line, he definitely explained something, but he's still kind of a cheeky old dude. His intent is that he'll set up the plan and let it speak for itself where Jeth is concerned. It DOES play for the audience a bit, but...well, that's the medium! I'll keep your comments in mind in the future, though. :)

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