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posted 18th Jun 2016, 8:00 AM

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18th Jun 2016, 11:08 AM

sigpig

The last speech-bubble in Panel 4 seems a bit awkward: (I've been beeng...".

Also, I'm getting a bit confused with all these hooded characters. It looks like the 2 Earth Mages are working together on the down-low, I can't remember what's going on with Genda, and I can't remember who this "J" character is.

There is NOTHING wrong with your comic, I have issues like this with ALL B&W comics (I guess my brain can't handle all the awesome)...

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18th Jun 2016, 11:55 AM

Gillian Renk

Whoop, that's definitely a typo, should be traveling. I'll fix that shortly!

As for the characters, I'm not sure which earth mages you're referring to, since there ate quite a few rolling around. The guy who just walked in and then left, Karthad? The other man from the flashback intro of the chapter? J? Who, for the record, hasn't been seen since the end of Chapter 2 so it's understandable that you've forgotten (she told them to go to Breslinhold--maybe worth rereading!). Genda, on the other hand, was just around at the end of the last chapter, leaving with Lessar to come rescue people. If you need more help, you can always PM me, but backtacking might help a little. I also have a cast page that has a little info (though it's purposefully vague to not spoil anything). :)

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