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posted 4th Oct 2014, 12:07 AM

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5th Oct 2014, 11:52 PM

anon

too much talking over use of exposition

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6th Oct 2014, 4:10 PM

Gillian Renk

Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind. :)

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25th Nov 2015, 9:10 AM

Lee M

That's always a big problem with storytelling. How do you give the readers all the information they need to understand the story without it seeming forced?

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11th Nov 2017, 9:44 PM

navegar

in my opinion this was well executed exposition

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11th Nov 2017, 9:44 PM

navegar

in my opinion this was well executed exposition

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11th Nov 2017, 9:44 PM

navegar

in my opinion this was well executed exposition

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11th Nov 2017, 9:45 PM

navegar

in my opinion this was well executed exposition

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11th Nov 2017, 9:45 PM

navegar

in my opinion this was well executed exposition

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11th Nov 2017, 9:45 PM

navegar

in my opinion this was well executed exposition

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