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posted 9th Jun 2014, 11:00 PM

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10th Jun 2014, 7:34 AM

JustSomeGuy

I wish I could write such natural dialogue. Seriously, I can hear that self-doubt/self-blame/panic in their words - the same one we all have when we feel like we could have done more to prevent something from happening. It's not their fault, the reasoning part of the brain knows that, but their hearts feel horrified for the deaths of innocent people, and can't help but take on that burden.
Well done.

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10th Jun 2014, 4:04 PM

Gillian Renk

Aww, thank you very much. <:)

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